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c16888feeca6a83b4536139adcbc14a6.png 书信写作10篇
一、书信写作
1.(23-24高一下·安徽阜阳·期中)你校即将举办校园音乐节,请你代表学生会在校英文网站上写一则通知。内容包括:
1.简要介绍音乐节;
2.鼓励大家积极参与。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Student Union
【答案】Notice
In order to enrich our school life, we’ll hold our school music festival on the school sports field next Friday.
Our program includes singing, dancing, playing musical instruments and singing together as a group. Some of the programs are related to traditional Chinese music, so that students, especially international students, can have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture. After the performance, the judges will select the best three programs and award prizes.
Hope you to participate in the wonderful festival, as l believe your talent will be greatly appreciated. Please join us and share your musical passion!
The Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学生会在校英文网站上写一则参加校园音乐节的通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
为了:in order to→so as to
包括:include→involve
与……有关:related to→associated with
理解:have a understanding of→have an insight into
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Our program includes singing, dancing, playing musical instruments and singing together as a group. Some of the programs are related to traditional Chinese music, so that students, especially international students, can have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture.
拓展句:Our program includes singing, dancing, playing musical instruments and singing together as a group, some of which are related to traditional Chinese music, so that students, especially international students, can have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some of the programs are related to traditional Chinese music, so that students, especially international students, can have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture.(运用了so that引导结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】Hope you to participate in the wonderful festival, as l believe your talent will be greatly appreciated.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句和as引导状语从句)
2.(24-25高一上·河北石家庄·期末)假定你是李华,你校将以“The Value of Money”为主题举办英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 金钱与人生的关系;
2. 你的金钱观。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all, thank you!
【答案】Dear fellow students,
Today, I want to talk about “The Value of Money”. Money plays a significant role in our lives; it can provide comfort, security, and opportunities. However, it is essential to remember that money is not everything. It cannot buy true happiness or genuine relationships.
In my opinion, money should be viewed as a tool rather than an ultimate goal. We should use it wisely to enrich our lives and help others, rather than let it control us. Ultimately, a fulfilling life comes from experiences, love, and kindness, not just wealth.
That’s all, thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The Value of Money”为主题举办英文演讲比赛这一情况,写一篇演讲稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:significant→ vital
提供:provide → offer
观点:opinion→ view
最终:Ultimately→ Finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Money plays a significant role in our lives; it can provide comfort, security, and opportunities.
拓展句:Money plays a significant role in our lives, which can provide comfort, security, and opportunities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, it is essential to remember that money is not everything.(运用了从属连词that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】In my opinion, money should be viewed as a tool rather than an ultimate goal.(运用了情态动词的被动语态结构)
3.(23-24高一下·河南开封·期中)人类在太空探索领域取得了重大突破,但有人却对进行太空探索表示质疑。请你就此话题写一篇英语短文,阐述你对太空探索的看法。内容包括:1.人们对太空探索表示质疑的原因;2.你的观点及理由。
注意:写作词数应为80左右;
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【答案】Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Some people have expressed doubts about space exploration. They argue that we should find solutions to other more practical problems, such as pollution and fatal diseases, instead of exploring space.
As far as I’m concerned, despite the huge risk and tremendous cost, the desire to explore the universe never dies due to the fact that space exploration has already made a huge difference to our world. Firstly, space exploration can increase our knowledge and drive innovation in numerous fields, such as farming techniques, food production and the creation of new medicines, which may help to improve our life. Additionally, humans are currently restricted to a single planet and should something happen that changes the environment of the planet, the entire human race would be in danger of being wiping out. Thus, space exploration provides us with hope for the future.
【导语】本篇书名表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇是否应该进行太空探索的英文短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
谜团:doubts→puzzles
尽管:despite→ in spite of
巨大的:tremendous→enormous
此外:Additionally→Furthermore
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Additionally, humans are currently restricted to a single planet and should something happen that changes the environment of the planet, the entire human race would be in danger of being wiping out.
同义句:Furthermore, humans are presently confined to one planet, and any alteration to its environment could pose an existential threat to the entire human race.
【点睛】【高分句型1】They argue that we should find solutions to other more practical problems, such as pollution and fatal diseases, instead of exploring space. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Firstly, space exploration can increase our knowledge and drive innovation in numerous fields, such as farming techniques, food production and the creation of new medicines, which may help to improve our life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4.(23-24高一上·江苏无锡·期末)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike来信想了解中国的春节,请你给他写封回信介绍这个节日。字数100词左右。要点如下:
1. 春节的由来及寓意;
2. 春节的庆祝活动;
3. 邀请他来中国欢度春节。
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mike
In your last letter, you mentioned that you want to know something about the Spring Festival. I am writing to tell you about it.
The Spring Festival has a long history, which was originally celebrated to scare away a fierce beast “Nian”. Slightly different from that in the past, it is now given new meanings and regarded as a way for people to enjoy the reunion with their families, however far they live or work. On the New Year’s Eve, each family has its members gathered together. They tell each other their lives in the past year, exchange gifts and eat a lot of delicious meals in the warmth of the family. Children can get lucky money in red envelop. People have a good time, holding opera performances and other celebrations.
I hope you will come here and experience this wonderful festival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国朋友Mike写一封信介绍中国春节,内容包括春节的由来及寓意、春节的庆祝活动并邀请他来中国欢度春节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
起初地:originally →initially
庆祝:celebrate →observe
美味的:delicious →tasty
精彩的:wonderful →excellent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:On the New Year’s Eve, each family has its members gathered together.
拓展句:It is on the New Year’s Eve that each family has its members gathered together.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Spring Festival has a long history, which was originally celebrated to scare away a fierce beast “Nian”.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】People have a good time, holding opera performances and other celebrations.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
5.(23-24高一上·四川绵阳·期末)假如你是李华,春节临近,你的英国朋友 Tom想来你的家乡旅游。请给他写封邮件推荐一处旅游景点。内容包括:
1.推荐景点;
2.推荐理由;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Knowing that you plan to take a trip to my hometown Mianyang during the Spring Festival, I’d like to recommend Yuewang Tower to you.
Yuewang Tower is located on the bank of Fu River. As a historic and cultural tourist attraction in Mianyang, it has a long history dating back to the Tang Dynasty. Standing on the top of the tower, you can have a good view of Mianyang city. Furthermore, you can also experience traditional folk cultures and have a taste of tasty local snacks just around it.
I’m sure that you’ll have a good time if you choose Yuewang Tower as your destination. Enjoy yourself!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。春节临近,要求考生按照提示给想来你的家乡旅游的英国朋友Tom写封邮件推荐一处旅游景点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
位于:be located on→ be situated on
追溯到:date back to→ date from
而且:furthermore→ moreover/what’s more
玩得开心:have a good time→ have fun
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Furthermore, you can also experience traditional folk cultures and have a taste of tasty local snacks just around it.
拓展句:Furthermore, not only can you experience traditional folk cultures ,but also you can have a taste of tasty local snacks just around it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you plan to take a trip to my hometown Mianyang during the Spring Festival, I’d like to recommend Yuewang Tower to you.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】        I’m sure that you’ll have a good time if you choose Yuewang Tower as your destination.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
6.(23-24高一上·湖南株洲·期末)假定你是李华,上周五你校举办了一年一度的科技节活动,主题为“科技与未来”。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次活动,内容包括:
1. 科技节活动内容;
2. 你的感想。
参考词汇:水火箭 water rocket;信息素养大赛 information literacy competition
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I am writing to share with you our annual school’s Science Festival held last Friday.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I am writing to share with you our annual school’s Science Festival held last Friday. Nearly 200 students, selected from Grade 1 and Grade 2, competed with all their strength on the playground.
The festival was celebrated by holding various activities both indoors and outdoors, including armament model racing, water rocket launching and information literacy competition and so on, which has sparked students’ growing love for science and technology. What impressed me most was the armament model racing.
The festival was highly spoken of, because it not only brings merry laughter to the whole playground, but also reminds us of paying more attention to technological achievements like air drone and being a well-rounded person.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件,分享学校举办的科技节活动,需涵盖活动内容和个人感想两方面的内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
用全力:with all one’s strength→with all one’s might
各种各样的:various→a variety of, a wide range of
激发:spark→stimulate
注意:pay attention to→take notice of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Nearly 200 students, selected from Grade 1 and Grade 2, competed with all their strength on the playground.
拓展句:Nearly 200 students, who were selected from Grade 1 and Grade 2, competed with all their strength on the playground.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The festival was celebrated by holding various activities both indoors and outdoors, including armament model racing, water rocket launching and information literacy competition and so on, which has sparkled students’ growing love for science and technology. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] What impressed me most was the armament model racing. (运用了what引导主语从句)
7.(23-24高一上·河北石家庄·期末)在学校网络安全月即将到来之际,校英文报正在征集相关稿件。请你就网络安全话题投稿,具体内容包括:
1. 网络安全的重要性;
2. 安全上网的具体建议。
注意:
1.词数 80左右;
2.题目已给出,不计入总词数。
Staying Safe on the Internet
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【答案】One possible version:
Staying Safe on the Internet
Our lives have been changed by the Internet, and we can get in touch with each other much easier. However, it has brought to us dangers as well. So it is very important to stay safe on the internet. Here are some tips I’d like to share.
First, protect our privacy. Don’t give out our address or the phone number. Someone might use the information to steal our identity. Second, avoid questionable websites. If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. Don’t click on anything. Third, be polite when you post comments.
Online safety has become a matter of great concern. Let’s think before click.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就网络安全话题写一篇稿件给校英文报投稿,内容包括网络安全的重要性以及安全上网的具体建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
联系:get in touch with →make contact with
利用:use →make use of
立刻,马上:immediately →instantly
安全:safety →security
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Don’t give out our address or the phone number. Someone might use the information to steal our identity.
拓展句:Don’t give out our address or the phone number, which someone might use to steal our identity.
【点睛】【高分句型1】So it is very important to stay safe on the internet.(运用了“it作形式主语,不定式短语作真正主语”结构)
【高分句型2】If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句和that引导的定语从句)
8.(23-24高一上·安徽阜阳·阶段练习)假定你是校英文报记者李华。上周六你参加了你市新建的体育公园的开园仪式。请你为校英文报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 公园简介;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
City Sports Park Opens
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【答案】One possible version:
City Sports Park Opens
Last Saturday, a sports park in the south of our city was officially opened to the public.
The park is not only a big park for people of different ages to play sports, but also a wonderland of nature and pleasure. With a wide variety of open spaces, it features high-quality and professional sports facilities, such as running tracks, basketball courts and tennis courts.
On that day, a great many people came and enjoyed themselves in the park. The park will hopefully serve as a wonderful escape from the busy city life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇新闻报道,报道上周六市新建的体育公园的开园仪式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不同的:different→diverse
做运动:play sports→do sports
设备:facility→equipment
玩得愉快:enjoy oneself→have fun
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The park is not only a big park for people of different ages to play sports, but also a wonderland of nature and pleasure.
拓展句:The park is not only a big park where people of different ages can play sports, but also a wonderland of nature and pleasure.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The park is not only a big park for people of different ages to play sports, but also a wonderland of nature and pleasure.(运用了not only…but also连接的并列结构)
【高分句型2】With a wide variety of open spaces, it features high-quality and professional sports facilities, such as running tracks, basketball courts and tennis courts.(运用了介词短语作状语)
9.(23-24高一上·福建福州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,上周日你的学校在报告厅举办了一场中学生书法大赛,请你为校英文社写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.参赛人员;
2.活动安排;
3.活动反响。
要求:
1.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数:100词左右。
参考词汇:calligraphy competition 书法比赛 lecture hall 报告厅 competitor 参赛者
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【答案】      Last Sunday, our school held a calligraphy competition in the lecture hall. All three grades’ students participated in it actively.
Competitors were divided into three groups according to their grades. They were required to copy an essay of 100 words in 20 minutes. All of them wrote very carefully. Then we evaluated the entries with great patience and fair, and gave results on site. After that, we displayed the calligraphy and awarded the winners. All the teachers and students praised them.
We thought highly of the activity. We determined to hold more activities like this in the future.
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生对上周日学校在报告厅举办的一场中学生书法大赛写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→throw
比赛:competition→contest
参加:participate in→take part in
非常:very→more than
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Sunday, our school held a calligraphy competition in the lecture hall. All three grades’ students participated in it actively.
拓展句:Last Sunday, our school held a calligraphy competition in the lecture hall, in which all three grades’ students participated actively.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Competitors were divided into three groups according to their grades.(用了一般过去时的被动语态结构)
【高分句型2】We determined to hold more activities like this in the future.(由动词不定式短语作宾语)
10.(23-24高一上·江西·阶段练习)假设你是李华,你校准备开展“校园印象”摄影展(photo exhibition)。请你给交换生朋友Robert写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.摄影展的目的;
2.作品内容;
3.投稿要求(2024年1月11日前发至邮箱:beautifulcampus@163.com);
4.邀请参加。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Robert,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Robert,
To enrich our school life and inspire us to pay attention to the beauty around us on campus, a photo exhibition is scheduled to be held in our school, whose theme is “Impression of the Campus”. As I know, you have a keen interest in photography and enjoy your stay here. So I’m writing to extend my sincere invitation for you to join in this event, picking up your camera to record what you find impressive in the schoolyard. You can cover anything concerning our life in school. It’s expected that all the entries should be sent to beautifulcampus@163. com before January 11th, 2024, which is the deadline for the event.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生朋友Robert写封邮件邀请他参加学校准备开展的“校园印象”摄影展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激励:inspire→motivate
展览:exhibition→diaplay
关于:concerning→with respect to
参加:join in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:You can cover anything concerning our life in school.
拓展句:You can cover anything that is related to our life in school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To enrich our school life and inspire us to pay attention to the beauty around us on campus, a photo exhibition is scheduled to be held in our school, whose theme is “Impression of the Campus”. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] As I know, you have a keen interest in photography and enjoy your stay here. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
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