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Unit2 Sports and Fitness写作技巧点拨
叙事类记叙文
叙事类记叙文主要是对某一事件的发生发展和结果进行叙述，重在叙述事情发生发展的过程。英语写作中的叙事类记叙文写作的考查重点是语言运用的正确性、句子的连贯性、信息表述的完整性等。
叙事类记叙文写作时应注意的问题：
(1)按照写作要求完成各个信息要点；
(2)正确运用时态。最常用的时态是一般过去时和过去进行时，但也要注意灵活运用其他时态；
(3)正确运用人称。最常用的人称是第一人称和第三人称。第一人称是从“参与者”的角度进行叙述，第三人称是以“观察者”的身份展开叙述，要根据具体情况合理选用；
(4)要重视句子的衔接，用好过渡词；
(5)叙事类记叙文的话题通常和考生的生活有关，如家庭生活、校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等，考生平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。
1．交代故事发生的时间、地点与人物；
2．介绍事情经过；
3．介绍故事的结果或谈谈自己的感想。
1．Long long ago, there was a．..
2．Once upon a time, there lived a．..
3．One day, a woman woke up early...
4．On a dark，rainy night...
5．At that moment, he ...
6．In the end, they found that...
7．At last, the boy finished the...
8．Fortunately, all the people...
9．In a word, we can learn from the story that...
10．Personally, I think that...
11．What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that...
12．Although I was tired, I learned what I couldn't learn in school.
13．I was deeply impressed/moved/touched by...
14．What an unforgettable experience!
15．I learned a lot from...
满分作文特训
假定你是李华，请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。内容包括：
1．上周日我和同学王平去看电影，在去电影院的路上看到了一位老人躺在地上；
2．我坐在老人身边照看着他，王平打电话叫了救护车；
3．我们和老人一起去了医院，等老人的儿子来了我们才离开；
4．我们错过了电影，但是一点儿也不后悔，我们为自己做的事感到自豪。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
第一步：审题构思很关键
第二步：核心词汇想周全
1．a film named Hi，Mom！ 一部叫《你好，李焕英》的电影
2．on one's way to 在去……的路上
3．walk closer 走近些
4．take care of 照顾
5．operate on 给……做手术
6．miss the film 错过电影
7．be proud of 为……感到自豪
第三步：由词扩句雏形现
1．上周日我和同学王平去看电影。
Last Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I went to see a film．
2．电影的名字是《你好，李焕英》。
The film is named Hi，Mom!
3．在去电影院的路上，我们看到了一位老人。
On our way to the cinema，we saw an old man.
4．老人躺在地上。
The old man was lying on the ground．
5．我们走近了一些。
We walked closer.
6．我们发现他伤得很重。
We found that he was badly injured．
7．相反，我们为我们做的事情感到自豪。
Instead, we were proud of what we had done.
第四步：句式升级造亮点
1．请把第三步中的句1和句2改为过去分词短语作定语的句子。
Last Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I went to see a film named Hi，Mom!
2．请把第三步中的句3和句4改为“see＋宾语＋宾补”结构。
On our way to the cinema，we saw an old man lying on the ground．
3．请把第三步中的句5和句6改为现在分词短语作状语的句子。
Walking closer，we found that he was badly injured.
第五步：过渡衔接连成篇
One possible version：
Last Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I went to see a film named Hi，Mom! On our way to the cinema，we saw an old man lying on the ground. Walking closer，we found that he was badly injured. So I sat there to take care of the old man and Wang Ping called the ambulance. After a while the ambulance arrived and we went to the hospital with the old man. The doctors operated on the old man at once. We didn't leave until the old man's son arrived. We missed the film，but we didn't regret. Instead，we were proud of what we had done.
参考答案：
由词扩句雏形现
1．上周日我和同学王平去看电影。
Last Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I went to see a film．
2．电影的名字是《你好，李焕英》。
The film is named Hi，Mom!
3．在去电影院的路上，我们看到了一位老人。
On our way to the cinema，we saw an old man.
4．老人躺在地上。
The old man was lying on the ground．
5．我们走近了一些。
We walked closer.
6．我们发现他伤得很重。
We found that he was badly injured．
7．相反，我们为我们做的事情感到自豪。
Instead, we were proud of what we had done.
第四步：句式升级造亮点
1．请把第三步中的句1和句2改为过去分词短语作定语的句子。
Last Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I went to see a film named Hi，Mom!
2．请把第三步中的句3和句4改为“see＋宾语＋宾补”结构。
On our way to the cinema，we saw an old man lying on the ground．
3．请把第三步中的句5和句6改为现在分词短语作状语的句子。
Walking closer，we found that he was badly injured.
第五步：过渡衔接连成篇
One possible version：
Last Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I went to see a film named Hi，Mom! On our way to the cinema，we saw an old man lying on the ground. Walking closer，we found that he was badly injured. So I sat there to take care of the old man and Wang Ping called the ambulance. After a while the ambulance arrived and we went to the hospital with the old man. The doctors operated on the old man at once. We didn't leave until the old man's son arrived. We missed the film，but we didn't regret. Instead，we were proud of what we had done.
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