2020-2021学年新人教版选择性必修第三册同步课时强化训练 Unit 4 Writing—An essay a

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写作指导
本单元的写作任务是根据本单元的故事写一篇短评。写作时需要注意以下几点：
1．简要介绍故事发生的时间、地点、人物；事件发生的起因、经过、结果；
2．对故事中的人物进行评论；
3．最后阐述你对这个故事的感受并解释你的感受。
常用表达
1．Once upon a time，there was a．..
2．Unfortunately，they were stuck in the...
3．They were very brave in face of...
4．They never gave up and...
5．Later，they managed to do...
6．From this story，we learned that...
7．All of us were moved by the great hero...
8．We should learn something from the great...

请根据下面的提示写一篇短评。词数80左右。
1．欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们一起登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。途中“坚忍”号被冰山困住了，大家弃船后逃到了大象岛。沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。最后，尽管困难重重船员们还是活了下来。
2．在这个故事里面船员之间真诚的关心和爱以及他们在困难面前的忍耐力和毅力也使我深受鼓舞。
3．从这个故事中我学到一个教训：无论遇到任何困难，都不要放弃！

审题
写作要求是根据本单元的故事写一篇短评。写作时应注意下面几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇短评，写作中应注意短评的常规格式。
2．主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。
3．主体人称：由于是写一篇短评，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：介绍背景。
第二段：简要介绍这个故事。
第三段：表达自己对这个故事的感受。

核心词汇
1．上船goaboard
2．在途中ontheway
3．被……困住be/becomestuckin
4．沉入sinkinto
5．放弃，抛弃abandon
6．逃跑escape
连词成句
1．欧内斯特·沙克尔顿和他的船员们登上了名字为“坚忍”号的大船。(aboard；Endurance)
ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipwhosenamewasEndurance.
2．不幸的是，途中“坚忍”号被冰块困住，沉进了大洋中。(unfortunately；be/become stuck in；sink into)
Unfortunately，onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheiceandsankintotheocean.
3．在放弃那艘船后，他们逃到了大象岛上。(abandon；escape)
Aftertheyhadabandonedtheship，theyescapedtoElephantIsland.
句式升级
1．用非谓语动词改写句1。
ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamedEndurance.
2．用非谓语动词改写句2。
Unfortunately，onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheice，sinkingintotheocean.
3．用非谓语动词改写句3。
Havingabandonedtheship，theyescapedtoElephantIsland.

用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
This story is about a great expedition in history.
Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.Unfortunately，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the ocean.Having abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island.Shackleton left them to find help.The crew were able to survive in spite of so many difficulties.
I was deeply moved by the concern and love between them and I’m also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in face of difficulties.In a word，I have learned an important lesson from the inspiring story.That is，whatever difficulties we meet，never give up.

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